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Hark Is that a unicorn I see Femdom that doesn t feature a psycho bitch Incroyable Honestly, I usually steer clear of femdom because cruelty and irrationality does not interest me, but this appeals to me And Maria definitely broke that mould Watching Maria attempt to wrangle two subs was interesting, especially with their different needs The infallible Domme was also vanquished giving the story a earnestness, as they need to regroup after missteps I had some misgivings, but I really liked Hark Is that a unicorn I see Femdom that doesn t feature a psycho bitch Incroyable Honestly, I usually steer clear of femdom because cruelty and irrationality does not interest me, but this appeals to me And Maria definitely broke that mould Watching Maria attempt to wrangle two subs was interesting, especially with their different needs The infallible Domme was also vanquished giving the story a earnestness, as they need to regroup after missteps I had some misgivings, but I really liked the way each member of the menage was dedicated to trying and being there for each other My thanks to the author for taking part in the BDSM Group s 2015 event [[ READ KINDLE ]] ☜ The Loving Domme ↠ After divorcing her cheating husband, Maria resigns herself to life on her own That is, until she meets Ben and Thomas Two submissive men, with two different sets of needsA bad experience with a young and inexperienced Domme has left Ben and Tom emotionally scarred All three will need to learn to trust again, if they hope to build a loving relationshipD s, Menage m F m F m m The author s a friend so Imma try to keep it classy, and by classy I mean, just one gif.Because m m f is my jim jimmity jam and I m a tumblr ho Sue me.Racy gif removed to avoid offending those unaccustomed to the human form.The author s new to the writing game, but she asked for feedback so here goes Things I liked The m nage relationship Obviously This is just a scene between Ben, Thomas and Maria, but everyone is involved and attracted to everyone Thomas comes from an abusive home and the The author s a friend so Imma try to keep it classy, and by classy I mean, just one gif.Because m m f is my jim jimmity jam and I m a tumblr ho Sue me.Racy gif removed to avoid offending those unaccustomed to the human form.The author s new to the writing game, but she asked for feedback so here goes Things I liked The m nage relationship Obviously This is just a scene between Ben, Thomas and Maria, but everyone is involved and attracted to everyone Thomas comes from an abusive home and they ve both just come out of an unhealthy relationship with their former domme The conflict is believable and the ending is cute.Areas for improvement I found the dialogue a bit stilted These characters are flat The story itself is dry and there s a repetitiveness that felt like spoon feeding Also, there is an excess of telling rather than showing.These are just really my own preferences and neither here nor there While I m not a fan of a lot of the pomp and circumstance of BDSM I do think it necessary to openly communicate prior to a scene especially when you re going to push on a boundary So, I didn t care for how Maria threw in the towel rather than a empathizing and b being diplomatic and trying some conflict resolution I mean, if you re going to scene on the fly then you ve got to expect hiccups and not just get butt hurt and diva out when things don t go according to plan Then again, I didn t really care for Maria s style so maybe I m just finding fault shrugs Overall, Donna did a great job with the prompt and her writing shows potential I thank her and her team for participating in the Bound In Ink event Dear Pervert,These are my two boys view spoiler hide spoiler They both have very different physical and emotional needs, and sometimes it is a challenge to keep it all together while I meet those needs.My boys have very different backgrounds, but they were best friends when we met, and continue to support each other They have been through some tough times, and that support got them through until I met them.We have not always had it easy, and there was a lot of fumbling around Dear Pervert,These are my two boys view spoiler hide spoiler They both have very different physical and emotional needs, and sometimes it is a challenge to keep it all together while I meet those needs.My boys have very different backgrounds, but they were best friends when we met, and continue to support each other They have been through some tough times, and that support got them through until I met them.We have not always had it easy, and there was a lot of fumbling around in the beginning I didn t set out to have two submissives, it just came about organically I don t regret a minute of it Cover Art by Misty Kayn This 17,000 word story was written as part of the BDSM Bring Out Your Kink writing event I had the benefit of reading The Loving Domme several times while Donna wrote it Why she picked on me to beta read I m no longer sure, but at the time I was a totally committed M F only reader.What has pulled me to be aopen, thoughtful, reader is the development of the protagonists of Ben, Maria and Thomas Then she put them into realistic plots No SEALs, no Domme with total command and 100% poise Real people, with the problems and challenges that a good plot provides I don t read MM I had the benefit of reading The Loving Domme several times while Donna wrote it Why she picked on me to beta read I m no longer sure, but at the time I was a totally committed M F only reader.What has pulled me to be aopen, thoughtful, reader is the development of the protagonists of Ben, Maria and Thomas Then she put them into realistic plots No SEALs, no Domme with total command and 100% poise Real people, with the problems and challenges that a good plot provides I don t read MM No longer so true because in The Loving Domme the emphasis is on showing the trust, the love between Tom and Ben I like those words, both in fantasy imaginary worlds created in books, and in the real world I live in What Donna did is remind me no,accurately, she showed me for the first time that in erotic relationships that aren t M F or F F love and trust trump mechanics To be fair to myself, I guess I did believe this about M M, F M, and all the multiples and m nages intellectually before but I didn t care to challenge myself outside of my comfort zone.While I won t be willy nilly buying every book with two six pack chests on the cover, or a woman dressed in all black, I m open to downloading samples That s tangible progress Enjoyable, and very different Fem domme story, thankfully What a pleasant surprise Maria is to the Domme world and I am sure if there werelike her, caring Domme s then it is a genre I would belikely to read Only two other s have I read and enjoyed in this subgenre The Siren, by Tiffany Reisz, and Laci on Top, also by Donna Jay So good to see no harsh, callous bitch out to vilify and belittle her submissivesno, here is one lady exploring her sexual control and domination, working Enjoyable, and very different Fem domme story, thankfully What a pleasant surprise Maria is to the Domme world and I am sure if there werelike her, caring Domme s then it is a genre I would belikely to read Only two other s have I read and enjoyed in this subgenre The Siren, by Tiffany Reisz, and Laci on Top, also by Donna Jay So good to see no harsh, callous bitch out to vilify and belittle her submissivesno, here is one lady exploring her sexual control and domination, working with two young damaged, male bisexual submissives Not all goes smoothly, or to plan, it s a learning curve for all Enjoyable, and I would love to know where they move onto after this short story.Well done Donna, comparatively new to writing, and answered a challenge well in BDSM groups Bound By Ink writing challenge 2015 You have potential to be a good writer, and hope there will befrom you.Four sound stars from me As per some of the prompt We have not always had it easy, and there was a lot of fumbling around in the beginning I didn t set out to have two submissive s, it just came about organically I don t regret a minute of it Yeah there s some fumbling around as these characters let go of past hurts and learn to put their trust in one another I love how all three came together in the end, pun totally intended As per some of the prompt We have not always had it easy, and there was a lot of fumbling around in the beginning I didn t set out to have two submissive s, it just came about organically I don t regret a minute of it Yeah there s some fumbling around as these characters let go of past hurts and learn to put their trust in one another I love how all three came together in the end, pun totally intended I really enjoyed this book from start to finish The scene where she sits on the couch and covers her face in her hands positively gutted me emotionally I found the D s dynamic to be so very muchorganic and believable than most BDSM based novels with their cold as ice, unemotional Dom mes The very piercing reality that the D in D s also has a heavy emotional investment, can feel pain disappointment fear is what took this story to the next level I have gotten so tired of book after book I really enjoyed this book from start to finish The scene where she sits on the couch and covers her face in her hands positively gutted me emotionally I found the D s dynamic to be so very muchorganic and believable than most BDSM based novels with their cold as ice, unemotional Dom mes The very piercing reality that the D in D s also has a heavy emotional investment, can feel pain disappointment fear is what took this story to the next level I have gotten so tired of book after book with the same archetypal D character that this was a breath of fresh air Review to come. 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